I was finished eating my breakfast, so then i just sat there with my eyes closed. I was thinking about my dad. It was hard to think because my family was around me and they were just talking to each other trying to give food to my horse Thumper. My sister Lucy was yelling "Here Thumper, come and get your food!" and my brother Bryan, was just eating his food like he hadn't eaten in a long time, i hoped he remembered to breathe. My grandmother was sitting beside me humming to herself, she was also trying to make a wood doll for my sister. My mom was on the other side of me, she was giving food to the horse. Then there was my dog star, she was begging for food, making noises like she was about to start crying. My grandfather was out side working on the barn for all of the animals that we had. Then all of a sudden it got all quiet, i opened my eyes and saw that everyone was gone excpet for my grandmother. She was still making the doll for my sister, and humming to herself. She looked at me and asked me " You thinking about your dad again, aren't you?"my dad us when he saw that my mom didn't want him here anymore becuase all he did was drink and lay on the couch and do nothing. "Yes" I answered her. " Dont worry about it, he'll come back when he's ready to work this out with your mom" my grandmother told me. "ok, thankyou for talking to me"
I was outside with my dog and horse, i was playing with them. My brother and sister came up to us and started to play with us to. Then while we were playing my dad came up to us and then the next thing i new i was running up to him very happy. He told us that he was comming back, he was going in to talk to my mom. When he told us that i felt very happy. He went inside, we followed him and heared the converstion. It was almost night time. My mom let my dad stay, and i was very happy. I went to sleep with no worries in my head.
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