Hansel and Gretal

Tell this story through any of the charachters eyes ( mother, father, Hansel, Gretal, or the old woman.



The Old Woman:

I just came back from the store from buying candy and bread to make me a house, so that i can make kids come to my house and start eating it. When the kids came i will be very nice to them and tell them that they can stay in my house for as long as they want, and then when i have thier trust, i will start giving them a lot of food so that i can fatten them up, so that i can eat them. I was out side making the house, it was kind of hard because i couldn't resits from eating some of the candy and bread myself. When i finished making my house, i went inside to rearrange things. I was done making everything so then i just had to sit and wait.

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Its been two days since i built my house and i already had 2 kids come here, i welcomed them of course. I went on with my plan to bieng nice to them. I gave them a lot of food so that i can fatten them up, the kids just ate and ate and ate, and they had no idea of what was about to happen to them. I told the kids to go inside of the oven so that i could cook them, and all they did was look at me and started to run and scream, I grabbed them by the colar of the neck and shoved them inside of them oven so i could cook them. Later, i went upstairs to lay down and rest becuase i was full of my dinner that i ate, and just fell asleep.

I woke up the next moring and saw that there were two kids out side of my house they were talking to each other, and i found out that the girls' name was Gretal and the boys' name was Hansel. I went down stairs and went outside to greet them. When they looked at me they looked kind of scared, but then when i was talking to them (in a very nice tone) they looked like they weren't afraid of me. I told them thet they could come inside and eat, and that i would not do no harm to them ( i had my fingers crossed). They came inside of my house, still stuffing thier faces with the candy and bread that was from my house. I made them beds and gave them food. I was as nice to them as i could possibly could.
They satyed the night over at my house, and the next morning i was hungry so then i was in a very bad mood because i was starving. So then I went to go and wake up the kids, when i woke up Hansel i took him out of the bed and i took him to the room where the was a cage in, and locked it. I went up staits to go wake up Gretal, when i woke her up i told her to go and give Hansel some food and to feed him until he got fatter, becuase i was going to eat him. When she heard me say that she started to cry. She did what i told her to do. I was in the kitchen getting the oven ready. She was behind me and i told her to get in, and she told me that she didn't know how, and i was so hungry that i wanted her to get in right away, so i showed her how, and she pushed me in. It got dark

Adam's Diary

I was walking throught the trees just minding my own buisnes, when i heard footsteps following me. I turned around and saw that there was a woman who was looking at me, she looked like she was trying to figure something out. I kind of ignored her and just kept on walking through the forest. As i walked, she was still behind me following me. It felt kind of wierd foe her to be following me so i just climbed up the tree. I got on to the hightest branch that i could reach without breaking it, i was on the branch looking down at her. She was just staring up at the tree that i was in. I looked at her face and it was very beautiful. I waited for her to leave but she didn't. I just stayed up at the tree , and fell asleep.

I started to get along with her. Her name was Eve. She would talk to me about anything and she wouldalways be the first to anwser things that needed to be anwsered and the nameof animals that needed to be named she would always be the first to do things while i had to take a long time to answer them. I stopped taking to her because, she would always act like she is smarter than me, so then evertime she was around me i would not talk or even look at her becuase she got vey annoying.